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The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years. The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years. The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.
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The given bar chart illustrates the information on how many men and women of various
age
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 groups in Australia did exercise in 2010.
Overall
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, the percentage of females was higher among all
age
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 groups than males, except the
age
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 from 15 to 24
years
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. The women's figures in the
age
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 group of 15-24
years
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 accounted for 47,7%,
while
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 men's 52,8% in the same
age
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.
However
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, figures of two
age
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 groups 25-34 and 35-44
years
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 accounted for 48,9 and 52,5%, respectively. There was a stable increase in the number of females who like sport and reached the highest percentage of 53,3% in the
age
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 45-54
years
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.
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, the number of women who did exercise regularly started to decline and showed 53% for 55-64
years
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, followed by 47,1% for
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age
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the age
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 group of 65 and over.
In contrast
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, the figures for men provided a considerable decrease from 52,8 to 39,5% from 15-24 to 35-44
years
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.
However
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, males who did physical activity regularly rose to 43,1% for the
age
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 45-54,
whereas
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 for the
age
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 group 65 and over reached 46,7%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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