The graphs below show unemployment rates and average earnings according to level of education.
A glance at the former bar chart provided reveals the data of the rate of unemployment categorized
according to
level of education namely graduate degree
, college
degree
, some college
as well as
high school diploma. The former graph depicts how much graduates earn per week in terms of their educational stages.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that graduate degrees and college
degrees account for the lowest proportion of the ratio of joblessness and the highest amount of average weekly income, whereas
some college
and high school diplomas make up the lower percentages.
Looking into detail, the first graph illustrates that only 1.2% of graduate degree
holders are considered to be unable to find jobs, but once they get hired, their salary is the highest at 1500$ weekly. High-demand educational programs are followed by college
degrees which double the unemployment rate to 2.5% as well
as
its average pay drops by 400$.
Correct word choice
and
On the other hand
, a college
degree
together with
a high school diploma assumed as less worthy for the work industry, their joblessness levels are in the middle per cent of 4.2 and 5.5 respectively. In addition
, the wages of these graduates reach a trough of 675$ and 600$ per weekSubmitted by Nz
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