The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates information about the daily demand for
electricity
, especially in the winter and summer seasons by the people of England. While the
pie chart provides data about the consumption of Correct word choice
The
electricity
in various things.
Overall
, the winter season claims more requirements for electricity
. Whereas
, the people used the electricity
for heating room and heating water in the largest proportion.
The line graph shows fluctuations in both seasons. In winter, demanding
for Replace the word
demand
electricity
remains between 30k to 40k units
till 18 hours
, then
there is a rapid surge in 21 hours
which reaches around 50k units
. However
, In 24 hours
, it sharply falls to almost 32k units
. In contrast
, the requirement for electricity
in the summer season stays under 20k units
, but, only at 15 hours
and 23 hours
it
hit 20k Add a missing verb
does it
units
.
In terms of consumption of electricity
, mostly utilises
in the heating room and heating water with 62% as compared to 18% used in ovens, kettles and washing machines. Wrong verb form
utilised
In addition
. Lighting, TV, Radio and Vaccum
cleaners, Food, and Electric tools are both the same with 15%.Correct your spelling
vacuum
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