The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures describe
about
the Norbiton industrial area now and future development Remove the preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
on
this
site.
Overall
it can be seen that the industries are
totally transformed in the upcoming days.
Wrong verb form
will be
Firstly
, a roundabout is situated in the center
. Change the spelling
centre
In addition
, two roads are connected with it and a river on the north side. Additionally
, factories are situated surrounding of ring road cycle and east
Correct article usage
the east
sideb
of the street.
Turning to the remaining maps it can Correct your spelling
side
sides
be illustrate
that four paths are connected in the middle and shops are constructed in the south-west corner. Change the verb form
be illustrated
On the other
hand
a medical center is established in the south-east portion. All factories are converted into Add a comma
hand,
house
. A new bridge is constructed into the river, which improves transport facilities throughout walkways. Fix the agreement mistake
houses
Moreover
, a playground is observed on the north-east
portion and a school on the east. Correct your spelling
northeast
Finally
, farmland remain
on the same side and a little roundabout is added on the south, which makes Change the verb form
remains
connection
Correct article usage
a connection
into
Change preposition
between
path
and Add an article
the path
a path
central
part.Correct article usage
the central
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