The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
The
give
pie charts display the electricity generation from different fuel sources in separate years, 1980 and 2000. Verb problem
apply
Overall
, in both countries, total production increased significantly. Moreover
, in Australia, coal had the highest portion among other fuel sources in both years, while
in France the main source of electricity was allocated to natural power
in 2000.
According to
the first chart, half of the total generation consisted of coal, and this
amount went up dramatically to 130 units
in the end. Despite the fact that Hydropower saw a rising trend, by 16 from 36 to 20 units
, natural gas and oil declined, to 2 units
each.
The second graph shows, in 1980, coal and natural power
shared a similar proportion together totalling 50 units
, and the former remained stable and the latter decreased substantially (2 units
) at the end
of the period. Additionally
, in the beginning, the share of oil, nuclear power
and Hydropower was 20, 15 and 5 units
, respectively. production from hydropower dropped merely 2 units
, although
the electricity generation from nuclear power
and oil, with a dramatic increase to 126 and 25 units
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