The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.
The given
chart
illustrates the quantity of Japanese tourists
' journeys in the time period of
from 1980 to 1995, Change preposition
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in addition
, the line graph
indicates the number
of those abroad trips that were made to Australia between 1985 and 1994.
As it might be concluded from the bar chart
, the least
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lowest
number
of tourists
from Japan can be witnessed in 1985 as the vast number
was in
95. Interestingly, the same tendency remains Change preposition
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at
the data that the line Change preposition
in
graph
shows. Correct your spelling
However
How ever
, in the contrast to the Correct your spelling
However
graph
, the chart
uplifts more steadily.
The both, chart
and graph
clearly state that starting from 1990, the number
of the
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tourists
skyrocketed. The chart
shows that the growth reached about 15 million Japanese tourists
abroad as the graph
depicts that the
about 6 per cent of all Japanese travellers abroad were to Australia in 1994. The sudden uplift can be trivially explained by the Correct article usage
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tourists
trends and economic factors in both of these countries mentioned above. Change the noun form
tourist
However
, the most probable reason could be visa policies.Submitted by katerina21.05 on
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