The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph displays the transported amount of
goods
in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four various transportation methods.
Firstly
, the number
of goods
which were transported by road had increased in 28 years from nearly 70 million
tonnes
to nearly 100 million
tonnes
, and goods
tonnes
had declined nearly 2 or 3 per cent from 1978 to 1982, and between 1990 and 1994 its numbers had not changed. Millions of tonnes
of goods
rapidly grew by water shipping from 1972 to 1986 but their numbers decreased between 1994 and 1998 and in 2002 water shipping had reached the highest number
of goods
which were more than 60 million
tonnes
transported by water shipping.
Secondly
, the popularity of rail transportation nearly had not changed in 28 years, but its popularity had declined from 40M tonnes
to 30M tonnes
between 1974 and 1994. The number
of goods
which were transported by pipeline drastically increased from nearly 5M tonnes
to nearly 25M tonnes
between 1974 and 1982 but its amount decreased to 20 million
tonnes
from 1990 to 1994, in the end, its number
did not change the rest of the years.
In conclusion, there were four various transport methods which were used to transport millions of tonnes
of goods
in the UK and road transportation was the most popular among them.Submitted by atakantemizkan0 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, number, million, tonnes, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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