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You have seen and advertisement from a couple who live in australia for some one to teach their two children your language for a year write a letter t the couple . in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job . What else you could do for the family and give your reason for wanting the job.

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Dear Sir/
madam
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, I am writing to express that I really want to get
this
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 job. I am
an
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 university
second grade
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second-grade
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 student. My major is English. I have
many
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 experiences
about
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apply
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teaching children English before.
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, one of the main reasons why I am suitable for
this
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 job is that I can purposely
to
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apply
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develop learning plans for children. At the same time, I can keenly identify where
students’
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 studying problems and difficulties.
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, I have enough
patient
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 to communicate and get
along with
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 children.
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, the place where I live is only a
10 minute
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 walk from your home, which is extremely convenient.
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, I expect that your children’s language expression ability will not be a problem for daily communication within a month. Meanwhile, I will create a relaxed and enjoyable learning environment for kids, so that they will not feel stressed or bored, which can help them find
interesting
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interest
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 in learning a language.
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, I want to use the money earned from
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 job to rent a house and pay tuition fees. I look forward to hearing from you, and if you need any
further
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 information, please do not hesitate to contact me, as I am pleased to supply it. Yours faithfully, Xiyue Tang

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General
Consider providing more specific examples of your teaching methods and experiences to strengthen your application.
Grammar
Remember to proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and ensure it reads smoothly.
Content
To enhance your suitability, mention any certifications or qualifications related to language teaching.
Task Response
You have clearly outlined why you think you are suitable for the job, detailing your relevant experience and qualities.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter is well-structured, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of your application, which makes it easy to follow.
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