You have seen and advertisement from a couple who live in australia for some one to teach their two children your language for a year write a letter t the couple . in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job . What else you could do for the family and give your reason for wanting the job.
Dear Sir/
madam
,
I am writing to express that I really want to get Capitalize word
Madam
this
job. I am an
university Change the article
a
second grade
student. My major is English. I have Add a hyphen
second-grade
many
experiences Add a missing verb
had many
about
teaching children English before. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, one of the main reasons why I am suitable for this
job is that I can purposely to
develop learning plans for children. At the same time, I can keenly identify where Fix the infinitive
apply
students’
studying problems and difficulties. Change noun form
students
Secondly
, I have enough patient
to communicate and get Replace the word
patience
along with
children. In addition
, the place where I live is only a 10 minute
walk from your home, which is extremely convenient.
Add a hyphen
10-minute
Moreover
, I expect that your children’s language expression ability will not be a problem for daily communication within a month. Meanwhile, I will create a relaxed and enjoyable learning environment for kids, so that they will not feel stressed or bored, which can help them find interesting
in learning a language. Replace the word
interest
Furthermore
, I want to use the money earned from this
job to rent a house and pay tuition fees.
I look forward to hearing from you, and if you need any further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me, as I am pleased to supply it.
Yours faithfully,
Xiyue TangSubmitted by cathyielts22 on
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General
Consider providing more specific examples of your teaching methods and experiences to strengthen your application.
Grammar
Remember to proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and ensure it reads smoothly.
Content
To enhance your suitability, mention any certifications or qualifications related to language teaching.
Task Response
You have clearly outlined why you think you are suitable for the job, detailing your relevant experience and qualities.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter is well-structured, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of your application, which makes it easy to follow.