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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
production
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 of three main kinds of
fuel
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 in
the
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apply
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great
Britian
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Britain
 in the past nineteen years. An increase can be seen in petroleum
production
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 during the two
decdaes
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decades
while
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 a decrease can be
noticied
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noticed
notified
 in coal
production
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 one of the most important fossil fuels.
Overall
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, the main
source
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 of
fuel
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since
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from
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 1981-2000 was petroleum and
it's
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its
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production
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 peaked
at
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in
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 1987 when it touched 120 after
than
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that
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 in 1991 a decline can be
noticied
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noticed
notified
 in
production
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 but it recovered it. Natural gas was
also
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 used as a
source
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 of
fuel
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 and its
production
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 remained almost constant all
overthe
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over the
 period,
while
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 coal
is
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was
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also
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 used as a
fuel
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source
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 and its
production
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 was 80 in 1981
then
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 decreased to 40 but
then
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 a steady trend can be seen.
To sum up
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, petroleum is the most used and main
source
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 of
fuel
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while
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 coal is
also
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 used but
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production
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the production
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 of natural gas is not much in
UK
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the UK
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, fuel, source with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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