The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
production
of three main kinds of
fuel
in
the
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great
Britian
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Britain
in the past nineteen years. An increase can be seen in petroleum
production
during the two
decdaes
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decades
while
a decrease can be
noticied
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noticed
notified
in coal
production
one of the most important fossil fuels.
Overall
, the main
source
of
fuel
since
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1981-2000 was petroleum and
it's
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its
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production
peaked
at
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in
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1987 when it touched 120 after
than
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that
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in 1991 a decline can be
noticied
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noticed
notified
in
production
but it recovered it. Natural gas was
also
used as a
source
of
fuel
and its
production
remained almost constant all
overthe
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over the
period,
while
coal
is
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also
used as a
fuel
source
and its
production
was 80 in 1981
then
decreased to 40 but
then
a steady trend can be seen.
To sum up
, petroleum is the most used and main
source
of
fuel
while
coal is
also
used but
production
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the production
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of natural gas is not much in
UK
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the UK
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, fuel, source with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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