The charts below show the total number of students who studied English in Vietnam from 2015 to 2018, and their purposes of learning English. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, the percentage of foreign students
in the UK, Australia and Canada had increased whilst in the USA stayed in the same quantity. futhermore
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australia
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Canada
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quantity.
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small
uk
and Correct your spelling
UK
australia
had the same indicators about foreign Change the capitalization
Australia
students
in their contries
approximately 120 learners in 2004 in both countries. In 2012 the amount of Correct your spelling
countries
students
was roughly 200 students
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