You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want

Dear Mr registrar, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that next
acadmic
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academic
season I am joining
trinity
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Trinity College
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college
as a 1st year student. I like to stay in
hall
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the hall
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of residence for two years
intially
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initially
. I prefer roommates of my age. the room should have basic furniture and
wifi
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a Wi-Fi
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connection. I am
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an eggatarian
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eggatarian
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vegetarian
egalitarian
and prefer
meal
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meals
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which are
egg based
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egg-based
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. I am allergic to
non veg
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food. so request you to kindly take note of it.
sometime
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Sometimes
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vegetarian
meny
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many
would
also
be fine with me.
Furthermore
, if
Hall
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the Hall
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of residence is not available
then
any other
college
hostel with basic facilities like furniture and wifi will be ok for me. please note that hostel should not too far from
college
premises. As it will
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to travel to
college
. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Jetty jones
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General
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Your letter appropriately addresses all the required points mentioned in the task instruction.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your greeting and closing were suitably formal, fitting the context of a letter to a college registrar.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hall of Residence
  • accommodation requirements
  • proximity
  • en-suite facilities
  • special accommodations
  • dietary restrictions
  • meal plans
  • kitchen facilities
  • campus canteens
  • securing accommodations
  • alternative housing options
  • private rentals
  • off-campus housing
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