You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph delineates the percentage of
people
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in Malaysia, Thailand, Indonesia, and the Philippines living in the
city
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between 1970-2020 and predicates their population in 2040.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
people
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living in the
city
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increased from 1970 to 2020 in all 4 countries and
this
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number
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has been predicted to
rise
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. In Malaysia, the percentage of
people
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living in the
city
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has been steadily rising since the beginning of the period, climbing from 30% to about 75% in 2020. Projections indicate a
further
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rise
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to 80% by 2040.
Similarly
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, the
number
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of
city
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dwellers in Indonesia rose from about 15% in 1970 to 50% in 2020 and a 10%
rise
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is predicted by 2040.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of
people
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preferring the
city
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in the Philippines
initially
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increased from 30% to 50% but ultimately decreased to 40% in 2010.
However
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,
after
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this
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period their population experienced a decrease before rebounding Predictions suggest a
rise
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to approximately 55% in 2040.
In contrast
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, the
city
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populace rose from a little over 20% to about 30% in Thailand and is predicted to
rise
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to 40% by the end of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, city, number, rise with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban population
  • Trend analysis
  • Urbanization rate
  • Economic development
  • Rural-urban migration
  • Infrastructure
  • Socio-economic events
  • Stagnation
  • Anomalies
  • Environmental concerns
  • Predictive analysis
  • Geographical aspects
  • Government policies
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