The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about how patients evaluated various Healthcare care aspects at 3 different centres. Patients evaluated 5
services
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provided by giving them a score between 1 and 10, with 1 being poor and 10 being excellent.
Overall
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, The
Peveril
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Centre had the highest ratings, followed by
Marchbank
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and Langston. Doctor
services
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were rated approximately the same (8.0 to 8.7) among all centres,
while
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Pharmacy
services
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were considered the least satisfactory. Appointment booking was rated as the most convenient in the
Peveril
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Center (9.1) and the most difficult at Longston (5.2).
Marchbank
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's
services
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in
this
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aspect were
also
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considered satisfactory, with patients scoring 7.8 out of 10.
Likewise
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, in the aspect of childcare, Perveril (7.5) and
Marchbank
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(7.3) were evaluated as equally satisfactory,
whereas
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Langston was given a rating of 6.3. With regards to Pharmacy
services
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, the score was as follows, 5.1 at Longston, 5.8 at
Marchbank
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, and 6.3 at
Peveril
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.
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, Langston employees responded the most poorly to customer concerns, scoring just 4.3 in that aspect,
in contrast
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,
Peveril
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provided the best service in
this
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department, scoring a 9.3
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Vocabulary: Replace the words services, peveril, marchbank with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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