the diagram below shows the stages in the life cycle of a dragonfly. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features1 and make comparisons where relevant.
The Diagram presents the growth p of
dragonfly
from the beginning to the end of the Correct article usage
a dragonfly
life
cycle
Life
begins as a small egg which is laid under the water in the summer. After one
week later, each egg hatches and Change preposition
One
immature
insect or nymph appears in the fall. Correct article usage
an immature
Then
, it eats and grows under the water in the winter. When the spring come
, the nymph leaves the water and Wrong verb form
comes
climb
up a plant, Correct subject-verb agreement
climbs
then
, it molts. Finally
, it is a
adult dragonfly. During the summer, the adult Change the article
an
spend
its Change the verb form
spends
life
flies
in the air, Wrong verb form
flying
hunts
, Wrong verb form
hunting
eats
insects and reproducing, beginning the Wrong verb form
eating
life
cycle once again. It lives like this
for a few weeks or months and soon after its life
is over. It takes one year to complete the life
cycle of dragonfly
.Add an article
a dragonfly
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Vocabulary: Replace the words life with synonyms.
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