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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
population
 of 2 countries,
India
 and
China
 and how it changes from the year 2000 to 2050.
Overall
,
it is clear that
India
 will have the highest number of
people
 by 2050, overtaking
China
, even though
China
 started off with a higher
population
. The
population
 of
India
 continues to rise steadily,
while
, the numbers of
China
 tend to plateau in future.
China
 had a total
population
 of just above 1200
billion
 in the year 2000,
whereas
India
 started off much lower, with only 1000
billion
 inhabitants. During the years 2010 and 2020, the
population
 of
China
 saw a surge with about 1350
billion
 and just above 1400
billion
people
 respectively,
whereas
, the
population
 of
India
 saw a sharp spike by 2020 with 1300
billion
 plus
people
.
Although
 the numbers are expected to be the same for both countries in the year 2030, with around 1450
billion
people
,
India
 is believed to overtake
China
 post-2030, leading to a
population
 of 1600
billion
 by 2050. The values of
China
 are predicted to remain stable throughout the period 2030-2040, after which a drop in the number of
people
 is expected, with values below 1400
billion
 by 2050.
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