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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
population
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 of 2 countries,
India
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 and
China
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 and how it changes from the year 2000 to 2050.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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India
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 will have the highest number of
people
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 by 2050, overtaking
China
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, even though
China
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 started off with a higher
population
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. The
population
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 of
India
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 continues to rise steadily,
while
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, the numbers of
China
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 tend to plateau in future.
China
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 had a total
population
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 of just above 1200
billion
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 in the year 2000,
whereas
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India
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 started off much lower, with only 1000
billion
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 inhabitants. During the years 2010 and 2020, the
population
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 of
China
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 saw a surge with about 1350
billion
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 and just above 1400
billion
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people
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 respectively,
whereas
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, the
population
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 of
India
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 saw a sharp spike by 2020 with 1300
billion
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 plus
people
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.
Although
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 the numbers are expected to be the same for both countries in the year 2030, with around 1450
billion
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people
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,
India
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 is believed to overtake
China
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 post-2030, leading to a
population
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 of 1600
billion
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 by 2050. The values of
China
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 are predicted to remain stable throughout the period 2030-2040, after which a drop in the number of
people
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 is expected, with values below 1400
billion
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 by 2050.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, people, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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