The three pie charts illustrate how many hours in a British university library are spent by undergraduates and postgraduates compared to other students.
The pie charts show the percentage of the
hours
that Use synonyms
pupil
from three different groups have spent in the library of a British university. Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
Overall
, the ratio of individuals spending time less than Linking Words
one third
of the day is reported to be high in the group of undergraduates Add a hyphen
one-third
as well as
all students.
First and foremost, in each Linking Words
graph
the majority of people attending Add a comma
graph,
library
Correct article usage
the library
is vary
. Change the verb form
varies
The
51% of postgraduates have been in that location for more Correct article usage
apply
that
15 Correct word choice
than
houre
of their days. Correct your spelling
hours
hour
Moreover
, there are a vast number of Linking Words
the
undergraduates who take Correct article usage
apply
thier
time less Correct your spelling
their
that
7 Correct word choice
than
hours
Use synonyms
as well as
all the educators.
In Linking Words
additio
, there is a slight difference in the Correct your spelling
addition
statistic
of Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
three
diagrams which are dedicated to Correct article usage
the three
study-
Correct your spelling
study hours
hours
between 8 and 14 Use synonyms
hours
. To clarify, the Use synonyms
quantity
of undergraduates and postgraduates consecutively Change the quantifier
number
are
28% and 32%. With regard to the same segment's issue, 35% of all people in Change the verb form
is
university
have been occupied in the library Correct article usage
the university
from
8 to 14 Change preposition
for
hours
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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