The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the cycle of salmon comprising two parts which are in a river and open sea.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the cycle of fish species starts with the emergence of young salmon and ends with adult ones travelling back to their place to lay their
eggs
.
To begin
with,
eggs
are laying on small gravels surrounded by reeds in an upper river which has a low current. These
eggs
take approximately five to six months before hatching baby salmons so-called fry (3-8 centimetre long). They will now move to a lower river which has fast flowing
as well as
staying and growing in
this
area for around 4 years. After several years, The frys now grow into smolts which have a total length
roughly
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12-15 centimetres and get ready to change their location from fresh water to salt water.
Furthermore
, after the smolts relocate to the open sea, they will need to live and survive for about 5 years before they turn into adult ones which have a length of 70-76 cm. After living in the sea for a
while
, they will return to their birthplace again to mate and lay their
eggs
.
Additionally
,
this
cycle will be repeated all over again.
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