The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of four varieties of materials that were recycled in a country between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
paper
and cardboard were the materials that were recycled the most,
although
their
levels
are reducing. The rate of
glass
containers and aluminium cans being recycled is steadily increasing,
while
the rates of plastic remain relatively stable. In 1982, 65% of
paper
and cardboard were recycled,
while
, only 50% of
glass
containers were taken for recycling. The rate of recycling
paper
and
glass
dipped in the 1990s, after which the rate of recycling
paper
surged to 80% in 1994,
although
the
levels
started dipping steadily till 2010 when only 70% of
paper
was recycled.
On the contrary
, the
levels
of
glass
recycling saw a rise from 1990 to 2010 where almost 60% of
glass
was recycled. The process of recycling aluminium and plastic did not begin until 1986 and 1990 respectively. The
levels
of aluminium recycling started off around 2% in 1986, which
then
saw a steep increase till 2002, after which it steadily raised to 45% in 2010, making it the 3rd most recycled material. Plastic remains the least recycled material as it stayed relatively flat just below 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, levels, glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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