The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides key information about Brazil's
economy
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ratio in
Finance
, Food processing, Manufacturing, Tourism and Oil, coal and gas in the years 2009 to 2019 and 2029.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that
Finance
represents a significant portion of industries.
In addition
, tourism and oil, coal and gas showed modest percentages throughout the period.
Whereas
, Food processing and manufacturing showed insignificant portions.
According to
what is shown, In 2009 Brazil's economy related
on
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Finance
as well as
the percent accounted for around 32%.
Also
in the next 10 years
growed
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it grew
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about 38%. Food processing showed a minor ratio, almost 10%.
Consequently
, the percentages doubled in 2019. Manufacturing showed a fluctuation from 22% to 16%. Tourism and Fossil fuels
represent
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represented
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an equivalent proportion in 2009 with a growth in ratio for Fossil fuels in 2019
about
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31%. in terms of Brazil's industries in 2029. The growth rate of the
finance
sector was substantial
42
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at 42
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%. fossil fuels account for 26 per cent.
While
other industries showed modesty between 5 to 10 per cent.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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