Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Accept
bad Wrong verb form
Accepting
situation
could be the door Fix the agreement mistake
situations
for
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to
new
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a new
opportunity
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opportunities
of
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to
live
. Several Replace the word
life
of
humans think that it is better to Change preposition
apply
accepting
Change the form of the verb
accept
bad
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the bad
situation
, like working in the wrong uncomfortable place, lack of Fix the agreement mistake
situations
money
and low incom
. Correct your spelling
income
Other
discuss that it is much better to Fix the agreement mistake
Others
improving
and Wrong verb form
improve
developing
their Wrong verb form
develop
conditions
. Although
, accepting bad Correct word choice
However
situation
could help to Fix the agreement mistake
situations
saving
some Change the verb form
save
money
which can enhance thire self
and keep people Correct pronoun usage
their
to stay
away from Verb problem
apply
stress
of their Add an article
the stress
conditions
.
You can stay familiar with your conditions
which
you can not put Correct word choice
and
your self
under pressure, even Correct your spelling
yourself
your
Correct word choice
if your
work
is unsatisfactory or low incom
job. Correct your spelling
income
This
is low
salary much better than nothing Correct article usage
a low
while
you can save some cash to study or get some courses to improve your skills, also
this
work
will give you a good experience and may add good value in
your CV. Change preposition
to
Also
,If they didn'
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don't
t
work
they will have alot
of free time and will be Correct your spelling
a lot
under
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apply
over thinking
, Correct your spelling
overthinking
that
will drive them to bad mental health. Correct pronoun usage
which
For example
, In the United Kingdom, the
overseas Correct article usage
apply
dentist
can'Fix the agreement mistake
dentists
t
working
in Change the verb form
work
be working
there
field before doing (Correct your spelling
their
ORE
) Overseas Exam which Correct article usage
the ORE
one
of the requirements Add a missing verb
is one
the
General Dental Council to start working. Change preposition
for the
This
exam is too expensive so alot
of dentists Correct your spelling
a lot
start
working any Wrong verb form
have started
thing
as Correct your spelling
anything
a
security or reception in Correct article usage
apply
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a clinic
the clinic
clinic
or any place even with low Fix the agreement mistake
clinics
incom
or unpleased Correct your spelling
income
place
to Fix the agreement mistake
places
trying
to collect Wrong verb form
try
money
to join
Verb problem
attend
this
exam. Therefore
, It is a good step to start their journey and keep cliam
to Correct your spelling
close
thire
goal.
The people who say that the best to try to improve and develop Correct your spelling
their
there
there
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their
skill
and don'Fix the agreement mistake
skills
t
accept any chance even was low income or uncomfortable work
. If the
people have Correct article usage
apply
money
to enhancing
their Wrong verb form
enhance
conditions
, intuitively they will not accept nothing
and they will be able to development their self. Rewrite the sentence
will not accept anything
will accept nothing
Such
as,
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apply
alot
of students prefer Correct your spelling
a lot
come
to the UK Add the particle
to come
studying
and Change the verb form
to study
improving
their English language and Wrong verb form
improve
join
Wrong verb form
joining
the
university. Correct article usage
a
Thus
, if you need
improve your Add the particle
need to
skill
and satisfaction, you need to have a facility for that which is Fix the agreement mistake
skills
money
, healthy
and environment.
In conclusion, accepting Replace the word
health
bad
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a bad
situation
might be good
way to start and don'Add an article
a good
t
put yourself under stress. While you
can improve Correct word choice
You
conditions
when you have a good facility. In my opinion, I believe that you should start any job can be open new field to you. So, you don't
stop and wait the
chance to start. You have to do anything to reach your aim.Change preposition
for the
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