The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below show the percentage of workers in three
sector
across four Change to a plural noun
sectors
countries
for about 30 years from 1980 to 2010
In 1980, Germany
's agricultural industry
accounted for only 0.5%, which was quite low in the year 1980 , Next,
the industry
in Germany
with the highest rate among countries
is 60% and the agriculture sector with the highest rate of 70% is mentioned in China.
In 2020, there will be huge changes in countries
such
as Germany
, the USA, Japan and China. The most typical industries with very high percentages are Germany
, the USA and Japan with equivalent figures of 80%, 70% and 80% and Germany
with the lowest industry
in this
chart is 0.1% and it has a bit of a sharp increase in China. The service industry
in other countries
has a negligible decrease from 40% to 20%.Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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