Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, there is an argument between
people
who believe that some college students
want to pursue another major alongside their first university
major while
others think that it is necessary for university
students
to put all their attention on their main university
degree
. This
essay will argue that learning another field
would be more beneficial rather than earning only one degree
.
On the one hand, some pupils in college believe that it is vital for them to have a second degree
in a field
that is
different from their main field
. They think that if they pursue a different field
of study, they not only will learn about different subjects but also
they will be faced with new concepts that can be useful in their main subject. As a result
, some multi-educational students
will be prepared for the future which can be useful in both academic and real jobs. For instance
, in Iran, the vast majority of university
students
who are attending electrical engineering courses, learn computer science at the same time
.
On the other hand
, other people
think that if university
students
spend their time
learning about other fields of science, they will waste their time
on a qualification that is
not appropriate for them. Learning another degree
puts students
in a position where they have to put their effort twice in comparison to other students
. As a result
, they can not concentrate perfectly on their main subject. However
, these days, we are living in a world where being a specialist in one specific field
, you can not live and communicate perfectly with the society around you. So, these people
will be isolated from their community. For example
, if someone wants to be hired in the GOOGLE company, they have to not only be a programmer but also
they have to have knowledge about how to run a business.
In conclusion, these days there is a controversial argument between people
who believe that college students
should learn only a field
of study instead
of learning different subjects at the same time
as their main subjects. This
essay has argued that accomplishing a second degree
would be more beneficial rather than only studying a major.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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