The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Contained in two illustrations is information pertaining to the changes which have taken place in a science park from 2008 to until present day. From an observational perspective, the majority of green spaces have been cleared to make way for new buildings and transport facilities.

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, both old and new buildings were linked together by footpaths. Beginning with the

north-eastern

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half of the park, the grassland was removed to construct a new research and development

center

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centre

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. Moving onto the

north-west

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northwest

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, the reception was repurposed into a university hub

while

the offices and the woodland separating

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the north-east

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north-east

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northeast

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and

north-west

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northwest

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remained

unchange

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unchanged

Moreover

, there was a brand-new cycle path and a bus stop installed parallel

with

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the old main road. Turning to the

south-eastern

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southeastern

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part of the site, the rectangular cyber security building was reconstructed into an

L shape

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L-shaped

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building, clearing the green area along the road.

Furthermore

, the car park was reduced in size

due to

the appearance of a train station. Looking to the

south-west

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southwest

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, it can be witnessed that the IT

center

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centre

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was renamed into an innovation

center

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centre

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Lastly

, the business units and the bottom left corner woodland stayed the same.

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