You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given line
graph
contains data about the percentage of people living in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia that inhabit urban areas in the time period between 1970 to 2020 including a forecast for 2030 to 2040. As it might be summarised from the
graph
, the least quantity of people, that lived in cities was in Thailand, but the
graph
implies that it will only increase in future . It is
also
seen, that the outnumbered percentage of citizens was and will be in Malaysia
and
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apply
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only once the leadership was taken by
Philippines
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the Philippines
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. The
graph
clearly shows that the number of Malaysian citizens will skyrocket. The line
graph
indicates that
,
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there was a huge increase in
percentage
Add an article
the percentage
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of citizens in Indonesia by
the
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apply
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2020 and
according to
the prediction, it will be only
growing
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. It will go up from 10% to 60% by 2040.
According to
the information, the surge will be
also
in Indonesia but not
such
a significant one.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban population
  • Trend analysis
  • Urbanization rate
  • Economic development
  • Rural-urban migration
  • Infrastructure
  • Socio-economic events
  • Stagnation
  • Anomalies
  • Environmental concerns
  • Predictive analysis
  • Geographical aspects
  • Government policies
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