The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Percentage of households with electrical appliances (1920-2019) 0 Percentage of households 100 90 80 70 60 50 40 10 0 1920 1940 - Washing machine 1960 1980 2000 2019 Year o Refrigerator ~ O- Vacuum cleaner Number of hours of housework* per week, per household (1920-2019) Number of hours per week 888888 0 1920 1940 1960 1980 2000 2019 Year -0- Hours per w
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The charts illustrate the figures
of
three electrical Change preposition
for
appliances
(washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner) that household
has and the Correct article usage
a household
number
of hours spent doing houseworks
from 1920 to 2019 in a country.
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housework
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there was an increase
in the percentage of Add an article
the house
a house
house
with electrical Fix the agreement mistake
houses
appliances
, meanwhile
the Add a comma
meanwhile,
number
of doing housework experienced a significant decrease through the period given.
In 1920, refrigerator
stood as the least home Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
aplliances
that Correct your spelling
appliances
people
used. There was 0% people
who use Change preposition
of people
refrigerator
. The Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
number
then
witnessed an increase
until
50% in 1940 and doubled up to 100% in 1980 as the most home Change preposition
to
appliances
that people
had. The proportion of people
using vacuum cleaner
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cleaners
also
accounted an
Change preposition
for an
increase
from 30% in the first period to be the most home appliances
that people
use in 2000 as well as
the refigerator
. Correct your spelling
refrigerator
On the other hand
, washing machine
as the most Fix the agreement mistake
machines
favorite
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favourite
appliances
in 1920 (40%) experienced an increase
until almost two times in 1960 then
fell slightly before rose to slighlty
over 70% in 2019.
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slightly
However
, the proportion of time people
spent on doing houseworks
per week witnessed a significant decrease. Started at 50 hours per week in 1920, Correct your spelling
housework
the
Correct word choice
and the
number
kept going down until half in 1960. The number
reach
its lowest time in 2019 Change the form of the verb
reached
where
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when
people
only used their 10 hours per week on doing
Change preposition
to do
houseworks
.Correct your spelling
housework
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