The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Percentage of households with electrical appliances (1920-2019) 0 Percentage of households 100 90 80 70 60 50 40 10 0 1920 1940 - Washing machine 1960 1980 2000 2019 Year o Refrigerator ~ O- Vacuum cleaner Number of hours of housework* per week, per household (1920-2019) Number of hours per week 888888 0 1920 1940 1960 1980 2000 2019 Year -0- Hours per w
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The charts illustrate the figures
of
three electrical Change preposition
for
appliances
(washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner) that Use synonyms
household
has and the Correct article usage
a household
number
of hours spent doing Use synonyms
houseworks
from 1920 to 2019 in a country.
Correct your spelling
housework
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there was an Linking Words
increase
in the percentage of Use synonyms
Add an article
the house
a house
house
with electrical Fix the agreement mistake
houses
appliances
, Use synonyms
meanwhile
the Add a comma
meanwhile,
number
of doing housework experienced a significant decrease through the period given.
In 1920, Use synonyms
refrigerator
stood as the least home Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
aplliances
that Correct your spelling
appliances
people
used. There was 0% Use synonyms
Use synonyms
people
who use Change preposition
of people
refrigerator
. The Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
number
Use synonyms
then
witnessed an Linking Words
increase
Use synonyms
until
50% in 1940 and doubled up to 100% in 1980 as the most home Change preposition
to
appliances
that Use synonyms
people
had. The proportion of Use synonyms
people
using vacuum Use synonyms
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
also
accounted Linking Words
an
Change preposition
for an
increase
from 30% in the first period to be the most home Use synonyms
appliances
that Use synonyms
people
use in 2000 Use synonyms
as well as
the Linking Words
refigerator
. Correct your spelling
refrigerator
On the other hand
, washing Linking Words
machine
as the most Fix the agreement mistake
machines
favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
appliances
in 1920 (40%) experienced an Use synonyms
increase
until almost two times in 1960 Use synonyms
then
fell slightly before rose to Linking Words
slighlty
over 70% in 2019.
Correct your spelling
slightly
However
, the proportion of time Linking Words
people
spent on doing Use synonyms
houseworks
per week witnessed a significant decrease. Started at 50 hours per week in 1920, Correct your spelling
housework
the
Correct word choice
and the
number
kept going down until half in 1960. The Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
reach
its lowest time in 2019 Change the form of the verb
reached
where
Correct word choice
when
people
only used their 10 hours per week Use synonyms
on doing
Change preposition
to do
houseworks
.Correct your spelling
housework
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