The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
These two maps depict the inside of a public
library
in two distinctive timelines, one
is from 20 years ago and the other is from nowadays.
Overall
, we can see that a lot of changes happened in this
place
, however
, the major one
is that, 20 years ago, this
library
was a recreation place
for adults and children, these days, is more about learning and educating.
Firstly
, in the centre of this
public library
, there used to be tables and chairs for customers, in
Change preposition
at
the
present, they are gone completely and the centre is empty.
Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, on the east side
of this
place
, adult-none fiction books
are not there anymore , instead
, there is an information desk and next to that we can see self-service machines, also
, they moved adult fiction books
which used to be on the west side
, right now is on the east side
next to the information desk.
Thirdly
, a cafe has been erected in the south and take
over the Wrong verb form
taken
place
of the enquiry desk which was there 20 years ago, moreover
, there was a room
for reading newspapers and magazines in the past, which is now turned into a computer room
, we can see this
room
on the south-west of the library
.
Lastly
, today, on the north side
there are two rooms, one
of them is on the east and the other one
is on the west, they are for lectures and children. In the children’s room
, there is an event about storytelling for children, also
, people can find children’s fiction books
in this
room
too,in the past, this
place
was for computer games and children’s books
used to be on the east side
which now is turned into the lecture room
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