The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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half century, the

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industry has increased

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a greater extent but there is a still small portion of places which

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havent

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haven't

touched yet.

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, it has been believed that the parts of

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where

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visits

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have much help

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tourism

. I strongly disagree with the statement and to justify my opinion, I will be sharing

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facts with an example in

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following paragraph.

Firstly

, There are many countries which are popular for their landscape and

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beautiful scenic

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. To cite an example, Indonesia is a favourite

tourist

destination for its astonishing

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and beaches.

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love to swim and hike in Indonesia.

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,

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part of the economy is dependent upon

tourism

. If

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stop visiting Indonesia

then

the country might face major crises. Adding to that the locals in the country are

also

supported by the

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as they buy

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while

heading back home.

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not only

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locals but

also

attacts

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attracts

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more

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after hearing all the positives from fellow

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. To elaborate more on my point, There are many countries in Asia

such

as Thailand, Phillippines,

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lanka

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which are

tourist

dependent and to

attact

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attract

more

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, government bodies

largly

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largely

invest in maintaining the

asthetic

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aesthetic

view and the

cleaniness

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cleanliness

in the country. There are several

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launched by the government where locals have the opportunity to join the cause.

This

not only provides

opportuntiy

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opportunity

opportunities

but

also

provides passive income.

To sum up

,

Tourism

has

immensly

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immensely

grown in

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half century and it has helped many countries in

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of

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the economy

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.