The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares data about the
amount
of waste
produced by six different countries in 1980, 1990, and 2000.
Overall
, the US produced the largest amount
of waste
material in the period shown and also
experienced a significant rise from 1980 to 2000. However
, unlike other countries, the level of production
disposal in Korea
decreased in 2000. Notably, there is no accessible data about waste
production
in Ireland and Korea
in 1990 and 1980.
In 1980, Ireland produced 0.6 million
tonnes
of waste
materials, which was the lowest. Furthermore
, Poland and Portugal made 4 and 2 million
tonnes
of disposal material in 1980 respectively. Japan
was responsible for producing 28 million
tones of waste
materials as compared to 131 million
tones
of waste
production
in the US.
Ten years later, Japan
and Korea
produced almost the same amount
of waste
, about 32 and 31, respectively. However
, the waste
production
of Poland was approximately six times smaller than that of Japan
, at 5 million
tonnes
. In addition
, Portugal made 3 million
tonnes
of waste
disposal, the smallest amount
this
year, whereas
the US produced 151 million
tonnes
in the same year.
At the end
of the period, Ireland and Portugal produced the same amount
of waste
, 5 million
tonnes
. The figure for Japan
rose to 53 million
tonnes
, whereas
the amount
of waste
production
in Korea
decreased to 19 million
tonnes
. In the US, the level of waste
production
grew considerably, increasing by 41 million
tonnes
and reaching 191 million
tonnes
in 2000. Moreover
, Poland produced 6.6 million
waste
materials, 1.6 million
higher than in 1990.Submitted by hesam.kord.f on
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