Write a complaint letter to the owner of a TV channel, to complain aboutvteh steady decline in the quality of their TV programmes over the last decades.
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to you to express my concern about how the
quality
of your TV
programmes has been dropping over the last
years
.
First of all, I would like to mention that I have been a follower of "TV5" for years. I could say that I have grown up watching your programming. I remember how your channel was popular for broadcasting Correct quantifier usage
few years
family friendly
comedies and Add a hyphen
family-friendly
last released
films. Add a hyphen
last-released
In addition
, the quality
of the documentaries that the company was producing were
outstanding. Change the verb form
was
However
, unfortunately in the last
decade, your audience is
Verb problem
has
witnessing
how Wrong verb form
witnessed
high
Add a hyphen
high-quality
quality
shows are replaced by reality television. and how shopping shows are now on screen for hours a day.
Secondly
, I have been checking your website and I came across the vision of your company. I was really surprised when I noticed that important values such
as the education of the viewers and the prioritisation of quality
contents
were part of it.
I would recommend Fix the agreement mistake
content
for
the Change preposition
that
TV
directors to
meet up and consider the direction that the Fix the infinitive
apply
tv
channel is taking. I would appreciate Correct your spelling
TV
if
you could look back and think about how "TV5" was in the past and how you could go back to that level of Correct pronoun usage
it if
quality
in your programmes.
I hope we can soon see some changes in the channel programming and that "TV5" can again become one of the leaders in the sector.
Sincerely
OlatzSubmitted by olatzbaroja on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Consider refining the transition between paragraphs to enhance the flow of ideas.
Task Achievement
Strengthen the argument by including specific examples of declining program quality and possible impacts on the audience.
Coherence & Cohesion
Effective use of formal opening and closing, which is appropriate for the letter format.
Task Achievement
Clear expression of concern and detailed observations about the decline in programme quality.
Coherence & Cohesion
Good paragraph structure, with each paragraph focusing on a single idea.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite