The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
The table gives information about the proportion of groups age of
New
Zealand between 2011 and 2012.
In summary, the percentage of Change preposition
in New
people
of
New Zealand witnessed a slight increase. Change preposition
in
In addition
, whereas
the proportion of people
under 40 years old decreased, other groups' age showed an increase sharply.
New Zealand's population rose by 0,6%. Particularly, the 65+ group ages view an upward trend of about 4% from 573.946 to 596.903. In addition
, the number of people
aged 40-64 expanded by 0.6%, from 1.331.907 to 1.339.898.
Conversely
, the most major group age, aged 15-39 decreased by 0.2%, falling from 1.577.256 to 1.574.102 people
. Moreover
, people
aged under 15 also
dropped by 0,2%, from 898.160 to 896.364.Submitted by lyviet0026 on
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