The company you work for has decided to close the cafeteria, as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director Give reasons of low usage How it will affect the staff Suggest ways to improve it
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding decide
to close the cafeteria, i was inconsiderate about Replace the word
the decision
Correct article usage
the dicision
dicision
Correct your spelling
decision
division
due to
we unable Fix the infinitive
to ultilize
ultilize
several Correct your spelling
utilise
provide
.
I must explain that Replace the word
providers
reasons
Correct article usage
the reasons
of
low Change preposition
for
ultilize
not a lot of Correct your spelling
utilize
provide
, as you know our Wrong verb form
provided
staff
unable
Add a missing verb
are unable
using
facilities at Change the verb form
to use
cafeteria
like wifi, kitchen, and a Correct article usage
the cafeteria
lot
water Add the preposition
lot of
at
Change preposition
in
bathroom
. Add an article
the bathroom
this
is a
uncomfortable for our Change the article
apply
member
, Fix the agreement mistake
members
i
think we will need Change the capitalization
I
compline
and change Correct article usage
a compline
decide
.
So far Fix the infinitive
to decide
staff
become lazy
to attend to Rephrase
too lazy
company
. Correct article usage
the company
i
think Change the capitalization
I
this
is big
mistake decision because facilities Correct article usage
a big
overther
is crucial for Correct your spelling
other
overture
Correct your spelling
employees
employers
employess
, so that way if we can not Correct your spelling
employees
using
provide we will be unhappy and I Wrong verb form
use
Correct your spelling
reckon
rack on
rackon
our Correct your spelling
think
staff
will be resign
I think we make Correct article usage
a circel
circel
to Correct your spelling
circle
disscus
about Correct your spelling
discuss
discus
mistake
, like Fix the agreement mistake
mistakes
increasee
Correct your spelling
increasing
Correct article usage
the fasility
fasility
for our Correct your spelling
facility
staff
able using
a lot of facilities and Change the verb form
to use
became
satisfice and happy Wrong verb form
become
do
Fix the infinitive
to do
job
, not resigen. enough for us to Correct pronoun usage
their job
Correct your spelling
receive
recive
Correct your spelling
receive
this
is Correct your spelling
brief
Correct article usage
a brif
brif
from my Correct your spelling
brief
complain
your Replace the word
complaint
sienceerly
Correct your spelling
sincerely
Submitted by patricius.yohanes on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Coherence & Cohesion
Try to structure your letter into clear paragraphs with an introductory statement, followed by reasons, impacts, and suggestions.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use transitional phrases to link your ideas more smoothly within and across paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Ensure your letter addresses all parts of the task by providing clear reasons for the low usage, detailing its effects, and offering specific suggestions for improvement.
Task Achievement
Consider the tone of your letter. While it is generally suitable, it could be made more formal by avoiding conversational language and ensuring correct usage of formal expressions.
General
Check your spelling, grammar, and punctuation to enhance readability and formality.
Task Engagement
You made an effort to engage with the task by addressing the key points required: reasons for low usage, impact on staff, and suggestions.
Greeting & Closing
Your closing was polite and appropriate for a letter of this nature, helping to end your correspondence on a respectful note.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,