The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The three line graphs illustrate the value of
Australian
trade
of
various countries Change preposition
with
such
as China, Japan
and United
States between 2004 and 2009.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, it can be seen from the line graphs that the amount of Australia's trade
in both imports
and exports
was increasing in every countries
. The figures are given in Change to a singular noun
country
billion
.
It is apparent that the number of Australia's Fix the agreement mistake
billions
trade
with china
for Capitalize word
China
imports
and exports
incrased
at 12 and 18 Correct your spelling
increased
billion
Australian
dollars
from 2004 to 28 and 35 billion
Australian
dollars
in 2009.
Additionally
, the number of Australian's
Change noun form
Australian
trade
with Japan
in number
of Change the article
a number
the number
exports
started with
21 Change preposition
at
billion
Australian
dollars
,rising to 29 billion
Australian
dollars
in 2007 and peak about
42 Change preposition
at about
billion
Australian
dollars
at
2008, after that drop to 30 in Change preposition
in
year
2009. Change the article
the year
However
, imports
in Japan
was
still stable at 20 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
billion
Australian
dollars
over the periods
.
Fix the agreement mistake
period
Lastly
, the amount of Australian's
Change noun form
Australian
trade
with US
, started from Correct article usage
the US
imports
and exports
at 21 and 9 billion
Australian
dollars
, before slight
increase to 21 and 10 Correct article usage
a slight
billion
Australian
dollars
, respectively in 2009.
To conclude
, Australia's trade
in
China and Change preposition
with
Japan
found that exports
more than imports
over the period. In contrast
with US
.Correct article usage
the US
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, trade, japan, imports, exports, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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