The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given chart depicts the percentage of a lack of the ability to read and write through 2
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standards
standars
which are region and sexes around the world in the previous year
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standards
Overall
, it is apparent that developed countries have the smallest rates in both gender
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genders
while
South Asia have
the biggest ones. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Additionally
, female
always saw Fix the agreement mistake
females
an
bigger proportion in every Change the article
a
regions
With regard to the figures of 3 origins Change to a singular noun
region
in
the left of the bar chart, East Asia experienced exactly 20% for Change preposition
on
male
and about 8% for Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
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females
while
Latin America saw a smaller gap between both sexes which is around 2%. This
was followed by developed countries which had the smallest numbers in 2 gender ,ranging from 2% to 3%.
Moving onto the remaining regions, South Asia account
for about 34% Correct subject-verb agreement
accounts
in
girls and nearly 55% Change preposition
of
in
boys, making it the biggest gap in all origins. In terms of Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa, the figures for Change preposition
of
male
ranged from 48% to 52% Fix the agreement mistake
males
while
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