The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of profits
that
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earned in a country during 2015 and 2016 and the table depicts the percentage of changes in
varies
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parts.
It is clear that
Petroleum
products
had the most income
of
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export
although
, the Textiles stood at the lowest point of export in both years.
How ever
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However
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,the percentage change in values of materials,Textiles had the first stage and Agricultural
products
showed the fewest amount of changes. Regarding the statistics what stands out
the
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scheme is that in 2015, Petroleum
products
earned about 60
billions$
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billion
and increased slightly by 3
billions$
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billion
in 2016.
Also
, Engineered goods rose markedly by 5
billions
$.
However
, Gem and jewellery
products
declined minimally from 43 to 41
billions
$. Agricultural
products
experienced a negligible decrease under 1billion$.
In addition
, the Textile export climbed noticeably from 27 to 32
billions
$. Looking closely
show
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shows
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that the
Textile
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Textiles
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with 15.24% of growth experienced the highest amount of changes and in the second stage were Engineered goods with
8.5
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an 8.5
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% of
increase
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the increase
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. Petroleum
products
followed the same way and grew 3%
while
, Gems and jewellery dropped 5,18% and Agricultural
products
had a minimal rise with .81% from 2015
to2016
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to 2016
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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