You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph that I am
gonna
talk about here shows the total Verb problem
going
percentage
of films released and the total percentage
of cinema ticket sales between the years
1996 and 2006. These two graphs are sperated
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separated
to
four main genres which are Change preposition
into
Drama
, Comedy
, Fantacy
and Correct your spelling
Fantasy
Romance
, in 2006 the drama
films were higher than that of 1996 films Correct quantifier usage
number of drama
as well as
comedy
also
had a higher percentage
in the 2006 mark. In addition
to fantasy which
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apply
also
had a higher percentage
in 2006 even though it was one of the least favorite
genres throughout the Change the spelling
favourite
years
with romance
being the least of all. Now lets
talk about the list of genre Replace the word
let's
let us
favorites
in the Change the spelling
favourites
years
1996 and 2006, Comedy
had the highest percent
of cinema ticket sales with Replace the word
percentage
drama
below it and then
fantasy and romance
in
the bottom of the list Change preposition
at
while
Drama
had the highest percentage
of film releases with Comedy
in 2nd then
fantasy as well as
romance
became last
, also
Romance
had the same percent
of film releases in both 1996 and 2006 Change the spelling
per cent
years
while
the percent
of cinema tickets was higher in 1996.Change the spelling
per cent
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