Some oeple think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult ought to be optional instead of compulsary. To what extend to you agree?

In

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present world, there is divisive opinion in society, whether

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mathematics

and

philosophy

should be

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,

while

others oppose that it should be optional. Personally, I strongly advocate for the first one. Regarding

this

issue, I will be stating some points to support my agreement.

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discussing

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how important

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for

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human life

also

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another

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benefit

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benefits

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such

as

to improve

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logical and

analysis

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skill

To begin

with,

mathematics

is "The mother of all

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science

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branch

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" and it is irrefutable that

mathematics

has

contribute

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to the

world to

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develop

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human civilization. Even

children

can

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learn

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mathematics

from

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and can implement the merits

for

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their daily

life

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.

For instance

, when

children

buy some food in the school's canteen, they can calculate the expenses.

Thus

, they don't feel confused and get fraud to buy

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as their ability to calculate the price.

Therefore

,

mathematics

is crucial even for

children

.

Furthermore

,

Philosophy

is

fundamental

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lesson for people to enhance their logical thinking and it

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for pupils to learn about it as

children

usually feel curious about something. They can ask anything.

For example

, when

children

feel curious about "why people should obey the rules" or "why people should throw the rubbish properly", they can ask the reason to

philosophy

teacher in their school.

Thus

, they will understand how society works from

basic

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and they can apply it in daily life.

Therefore

philosophy

is fundamental to

growth

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children's

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logical thinking To summarise,

Mathematics

and

Philosophy

are important for

children

to improve their logical and analytical

skill

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and they can learn from

basic

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.

Hence

, I strongly agree that

children

should start

learn

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mathematics

and

philosophy

.

Besides

, I suggest that

teacher

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should teach these

lesson

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with funny things so

children

will not bored and will understand

it

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from

basic

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.