The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
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The chart depicts some changes in the proportion of individuals who were born inside and outside
Astralia
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Australia
in three different regions: cities,
towns
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, and rural areas, from 1995 to 2010.
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, it can be seen that the period between 1995 and 2010 witnessed a slight increase in those who chose to give birth in domestic and international cities,
while
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the opposite was true for the percentage of locals in
towns
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. It is
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noticeable that fewer citizens are inclined to have babies in remote places. In Australia, cities enticed individuals to reside, with around 50% in 1995, rising to 65% in 2010. Meanwhile, 20% and 30% were the figures for people born in
towns
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and rural areas in 1995, respectively, slightly decreasing to 15% in both areas in 2010. Outside Australia, metropolitan destinations were still a preference among citizens, with a slight rise to 10% in 1995 , and 15% in 2010, but
towns
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were less popular, with 10% for both surveyed years. In 1995, 40% of people were born overseas,
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, in 2010,
this
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figure fell significantly to 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words towns with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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