The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The first diagram illustrates the cycle of the silkworm and the second diagram presents the process of
silk
cloth manufacturing.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the life cycle has four main stages which
starts
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with emerging from eggs before laying their eggs to repeat it again.
Moreover
, there are five procedures from changing
silk
thread
to clothes.
To begin
with, Adult moths lay their eggs on a mulberry leave and after ten days, larvas emerge and feed on the leaves of mulberry trees. They are going to use four to six weeks before starting to cover themselves with
silk
thread
.
However
, they need approximately three to eight days to cover all of their parts and live inside their close
thread
so-called "cocoon". After spending around sixteen days in their cocoon, they hatch and turn into adult form, moths.
Additionally
, in order to produce
silk
cloth, the perfect
silk
thread
from the cycle of worms is selected and collected. They will be put into the pot to cleanse with high-temperature water to make them loosen,
furthermore
, each of them will be unwound and turn into roughly 300-900 metres long
thread
.
This
thread
is
then
twisted and becomes a strand,
in addition
, it is dyed.
Consequently
, after waiting for it to dry, it will be weaved to make a new cloth.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words silk, thread with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Silkworm (Bombyx mori)
  • Sericulture
  • Egg
  • Larva/larvae
  • Cocoon
  • Moth
  • Mulberry leaves
  • Pupa/pupae
  • Spinning
  • Weaving
  • Dyeing
  • Silk threads
  • Silk cloth
  • Life cycle
  • Metamorphosis
  • Harvesting
  • Domestication
  • Natural fibers
  • Textile industry
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