the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart demonstrates the power
production
and consumption
in Kilowatts per hour by billions in various countries
by rank in 2014.
Overall
, ten countries
, China and the United States of America, are at the top in terms of production
and consumption
. China obtained the first rank with a production
rate of 5,398 and a consumption
rate of 5,322 billion
kWh
. Likewise
, America stands at 4,099 in production
and 3865 kWh
in utilization.
Following the top two, Russia, Japan, and India produced 1,057 billion
kWh
, 935.2 billion
kWh
, and 871 billion
kWh
respectively, with consumption
rates of 1,038 billion
kWh
, 856 billion
kWh
, and 698.8 billion
kWh
in the same order. Interestingly, apart from Germany, other countries
such
as Canada, France, Brazil, and Korea exhibit similar production
and consumption
rates.
The most developed countries'
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countries
production
and utilisations are heavily high due to
major manufacturing and industrialisation.Submitted by sivareddymarella6 on
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