The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps illustrate the development which took place in Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps shows a transformation from a village to a residential area. In the year 1930, there were a great number of farmlands and few private houses
.
On the west side of the main road
, farms were demolished and a U-shaped road
which was surrounded by houses
appeared. Also
, a residential area was built along the main road
. In addition
, two shops were knocked down to make way for a new street for residents where houses
were located opposite each other.
On the east side of the main road
, a primary school was extended which fitted a large number of students. Farmlands above the school disappeared, and new houses
were constructed instead
. Meanwhile, there were gardens and a large house in the middle of the east side were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
also
reconstructed into a retirement home. Finally
, from a nursing home and below, private houses
were erected along the main road
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