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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates the proportions of
Australian
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exports
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 to various countries, including
Japan
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, the US,
China
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, and
India
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, between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
Australian
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exports
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 to
China
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 and
India
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 showed an increasing trend,
while
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exports
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 to
Japan
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 and the US decreased.
According to
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 the information,
Australian
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exports
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 to
China
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 and
India
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 were approximately 3% in 1990.
Afterward
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,
exports
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 to
China
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 and
India
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 increased to 11% and 5% in 2005, respectively. In 2010,
exports
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 to
China
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 increased dramatically to 25%.
However
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,
exports
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 to
India
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 only slightly increased to 7%. By the end of the period,
exports
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 to
China
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 rose to 28%,
while
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 those to
India
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 dropped to 5%.
Additionally
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,
Australian
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exports
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 to
Japan
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 and the US started at 26% and 11%, respectively, in 1990. By 1995, both countries saw decreases to 20% and 8%. In the next five years,
exports
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 to
Japan
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 remained at 18%,
while
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exports
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 to the US grew to 12%. In 2012,
exports
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 to
Japan
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 and the US moderately decreased to 11% and 6%, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, exports, japan, china, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentages
  • exports
  • trend
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • economic ties
  • demand
  • decline
  • recovery
  • policy changes
  • trade relationship
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • temporary surge
  • specific events
  • incentives
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