The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps illustrate the development of the layout of Westley

town

in 1815 and

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nowadays,

Overall

, it can be seen that the

town

underwent a dramatic construction, including new facilities and transportation links. In the past, Westley

town

was still undeveloped. There is only one road that

connected

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the

town

to London by

Twine

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the Twine

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Toll bridge across the river

twine

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Twine

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. Natural areas, including Lenton

woods

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Woods

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and Lake Lenton located at the north side of the

town

, with some buildings

such

as Lord Westley's House.

Moreover

, to the south, there was

town

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a town

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hall and market square located

nearby

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near

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residential areas, and fields next to it in the

south west

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southwest

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. At present time, it is worth noticing that the

town

has been modernizing, with

additional

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an additional

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railway and the station that replaced the fields. The bridge

is tore

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down and

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the

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wood has been cut down to make way for

housing

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a housing

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estate.

However

, the lake and the village remain unchanged.

Furthermore

building

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buildings

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except the market square and

townhall

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town hall

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has

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have

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been replaced by other facilities

such

museum

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museums

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and shopping

center

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centers

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. The houses area is expanded to the south with

new

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a new

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cinema and the extended road leading to it.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.

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3 paragraphs

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5.50

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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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