The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two bar charts provide information on how many
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students
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in percentage studied a foreign
language
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compared by
genders
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gender
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and by
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the three
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most popular foreign languages in two
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years, 1984 and 2007.
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, there were more
students
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enrolled in learning a second
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in 1984 than in 2007. If we compare the genders, girls are more interested in studying a foreign
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than boys in both of the years. In 1984, nearly 50% of female
students
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took the subject of a foreign
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which is about 20% more than that of
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male
students
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. In 2007, the girls' proportion dropped to 40% and the boys' one
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fell, to 35%. Looking into the details of the percentages of
students
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who studied French, German and
Spanish
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, it is clear to see that French is the most
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popular
second
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among
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teenagers and
Spanish
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gained the least interest. In 1984,
French
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the French
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accounted for by far the largest proportion of 50% which is more than
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the German
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German
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of
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20%, followed by
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Spanish
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the Spanish
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which covered the smallest proportion
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5%. In 2007, the demand
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learning French declined significantly to just over 20%.
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followed
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same pattern which decreased to approximately 10%,
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,
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reached 10% which doubled the figure in 1984.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, language, spanish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • modern foreign languages
  • English-speaking country
  • demographic
  • participation
  • gender disparities
  • trends
  • popularity rankings
  • analyzing
  • implications
  • cultural factors
  • economic ties
  • global job market
  • increasingly globalized
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