The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of a variety of activities both genders of youngsters enjoy doing in their leisure time.
Overall
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it is clear that
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male students are keen to play basketball and computer games
while
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female learners decide to read and dance.
To begin
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with, looking at the activities of male children, they mostly spend their time on games which
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34%
while
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soccer has half the percentage of them. Basketball comes in second place in the boy group,
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26%.
Furthermore
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, skateboarding and listening to music register at almost the same number, 11% and 10% respectively. An activity that male students are obsessed with the least is reading, at only 2%.
Additionally
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, dancing in female young generations is at 27% and came in first place, followed by reading books at 21%. PC games and netball have nearly the same fraction which is roughly at 15%.
Besides
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, gymnastics in girls is at 11% same as skateboarding in boys. The ratio of female learners who listen to music is at 10% as well.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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