The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australia water consumption for last year.
The bar
chart
illustrates about
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apply
australian
annual Change the capitalization
Australian
water
consumption
in several selected cities in
average throughout Change preposition
on
previous
year. Meanwhile, the pie graph describes Add an article
the previous
regarding
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apply
australian
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Australian
water
consumption
for distribution in many fields.
Overall
, in the bar chart
, it can be seen that Pert became city
which spent Add an article
a city
greatest
number of Change the article
the greatest
water
resource
. Meanwhile, in the pie graph, the Fix the agreement mistake
resources
water
consumption
distribution mostly referred
to the agriculture sector.
Looking in more detail, in the bar Wrong verb form
refers
chart
, Perth was a residential city which reached highest
number of Add an article
the highest
water
consumption
namely 300 kilolitre
. Change to a plural noun
kilolitres
Next,
it was followed by Adelaide and Brisbane for the highest water
spending with a slight difference between them.Then
, Sydney consumed about 200 kilolitre
and continued by Melbourne and Change to a plural noun
kilolitres
canberra
with total Change the capitalization
Canberra
needs
for Fix the agreement mistake
need
water
was almost 150 kilolitre
.
In the meantime for the pie Fix the agreement mistake
kilolitres
chart
, most water
was distributed for
agriculture about 67%. Change preposition
to
Then
other sectors such
as households, electricity & gass
supply, sewage, drainage and sewage obtained about 9-7% of Correct your spelling
gas
water
consumption
. Moreover
, there was another field
, like Fix the agreement mistake
other fields
the
mining, manufacturing and other industries only get about under 5% of Correct article usage
apply
water
to fulfill
their primary needs.Change the spelling
fulfil
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