The chart below shows the percentages of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

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The given graph depicts the proportion of

people

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who were either having their own houses or were renting in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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, it can be seen that the trend of renting

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decreased in the given time period as

people

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preferred to buy their own houses. In 1918, rented

accommodation

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was higher

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78%, and the percentage of

people

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living there was at least around 22%.

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with the passage of time,

people

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started to prefer their own houses and the renting trend started to fall.

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, 1971 was the time when the percentage of rented and owned

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was the same

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at 50%. In 1981, owned

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increased by 10% from 50% to 60%,

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rented declined by 10% and dropped to 40% from 50%.

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, in the year 2001 owned property surged to its highest point

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nearly 69% and rented

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fell to its lowest point to just over 30%

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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162 words

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