The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line
graph
gives information about four countries
with Asian populations living in cities from 1970 to 2020, divide
by 10 years. Wrong verb form
divided
Also
, you can check the predicted information selected by 2030 and 2024 in the line graph
as well. A glance at the graph
reveals that the
living in cities in the future will go up.
The Correct article usage
apply
graph
indicates there are two countries
' populations will step down in the future. The population
of the Phillippines is higher than Malaysia at begin of 1970. In 1990, Malaysia's population
was over that Philippines. On the one hand, the population
of Indonesia is lower than Thailand, but it dramatically changed in 2000, then
continued to grow.
Correct word choice
and then
Overall
, all countries
's populatioin
is steadily increasing, the Correct your spelling
population
population
of Malaysia is the one of over 80% as predicted. Indonesia is going up to second countries
even though the population
is lowest at begin.Submitted by CheeseCiao on
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