The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays how much
electricity
was produced and consumed by 10 countries
within the year of
2024. Change preposition
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Overall
, the production
of electricity
surpassed its consumption in all countries
except for Germany.
There are five countries
that produce more than 700 billion
KWh
in 2024 and the highest producer amongst these five countries
is China, with a total electricity
production
of 5.398 billion
KWh
. United
States was in Correct article usage
The United
the
second place with a total Correct article usage
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electricity
production
of around 4.000 billion
KWh
Fix capitalization
kWh
and
followed by Russia, Japan, and India with a total Correct word choice
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production
less
than 20 Change preposition
of less
percent
of China’s Change the spelling
per cent
production
respectively. The remaining five countries
generated not more than 700 billion
KWh
with Republic
of Korea as the Correct article usage
the Republic
last
country, producing a total electricity
less
than 500 Change preposition
of less
billion
KWh
.
With regard to the
consumption, China Correct article usage
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also
ranked first with a
total usage of Remove the article
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electricity
of more than 5000 billion
KWh
. The sequence of ranking of Fix capitalization
kWh
electricity
consumption is the same as the electricity
production
ranking, except that Germany consumed more electricity
than it produced, making it to
have an Fix the infinitive
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electricity
deficit of around 50 billion
Kwh
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