The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays how much
electricity
was produced and consumed by 10
countries
within the year
of
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2024.
Overall
, the
production
of
electricity
surpassed its consumption in all
countries
except for Germany. There are five
countries
that produce more than 700
billion
KWh
in 2024 and the highest producer amongst these five
countries
is China, with a total
electricity
production
of 5.398
billion
KWh
.
United
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States was in
the
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second place with a total
electricity
production
of around 4.000
billion
KWh
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and
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followed by Russia, Japan, and India with a total
production
less
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of less
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than 20
percent
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of China’s
production
respectively. The remaining five
countries
generated not more than 700
billion
KWh
with
Republic
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the Republic
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of Korea as the
last
country, producing a total
electricity
less
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than 500
billion
KWh
. With regard to
the
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consumption, China
also
ranked first with
a
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total usage of
electricity
of more than 5000
billion
KWh
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. The sequence of ranking of
electricity
consumption is the same as the
electricity
production
ranking, except that Germany consumed more
electricity
than it produced, making it
to
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have an
electricity
deficit of around 50
billion
Kwh
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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