The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts represent the data related to the marital
status
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of the citizens in
Canada
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and Australia.
Overall
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,
Canada
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faces separated but not divorced cases
while
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Australia is dominant with the married
status
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. Looking into details,
Canada
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is facing a huge trouble in which most of the married people are becoming apart without divorcing as showing more than half of the proportion in marital
status
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.
However
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,
that is
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not the case for Australians as their married people dominate in society, It is interesting to note that, Even though same-sex marriages are prevailing in the Australian regions having 3 per cent among marital
status
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, there is not a single case reported in
Canada
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.
This
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might be
due to
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laws and regulations in the Canadian government.
In addition
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, Never-married and divorced situations are the same in proportions in
Canada
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, which is 7%.
Besides
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, for Australians, these two statuses are more or less closer values.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words status, canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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