The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.

Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts compare the proportion of
people
aged 23-65 by various professions in a town
of
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in
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the
UK
(
Ashby
) and in the
UK
in 2008.
Overall
, it is evident that almost four-tenths of
people
were engaged in official jobs and personal services in
Ashby
,
whereas
most
people
preferred to work in office settings, technical sites, and personal services in the
UK
. As the graph shows, personal services were more popular in
Ashby
among other sectors, with 21%, but in the
UK
, most
people
engaged in office work, made up 19%.
In contrast
, the figures for the construction sector and the unemployed made up 30% in
Ashby
and 20% in the whole part of the
UK
.
On the other hand
, there was a slight difference of 1% in shop work between
Ashby
and the
UK
. Regarding technical sites, the rates of
people
were 9% in
Ashby
and 17% in the
UK
respectively.
However
, the figures for professional sectors were 8% in
Ashby
and 14% in the
UK
respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, uk, ashby with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • occupational distribution
  • employment structure
  • percentages
  • overrepresented
  • underrepresented
  • demographic factors
  • educational background
  • economic implications
  • national average
  • regional variation
  • workforce composition
  • sectoral employment
  • job market dynamics
  • statistical comparison
  • trend analysis
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