The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts compare the proportion of
people
aged 23-65 by various professions in a town of
the Change preposition
in
UK
(Ashby
) and in the UK
in 2008.
Overall
, it is evident that almost four-tenths of people
were engaged in official jobs and personal services in Ashby
, whereas
most people
preferred to work in office settings, technical sites, and personal services in the UK
.
As the graph shows, personal services were more popular in Ashby
among other sectors, with 21%, but in the UK
, most people
engaged in office work, made up 19%. In contrast
, the figures for the construction sector and the unemployed made up 30% in Ashby
and 20% in the whole part of the UK
.
On the other hand
, there was a slight difference of 1% in shop work between Ashby
and the UK
. Regarding technical sites, the rates of people
were 9% in Ashby
and 17% in the UK
respectively. However
, the figures for professional sectors were 8% in Ashby
and 14% in the UK
respectively.Submitted by mohammad39 on
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